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An apology to a loved one by ~demonfox666:icondemonfox666:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Hello my dear, it’s been quite a while since I have seen your face.
Your body has grown older and your heart has grown colder
and I don’t blame you at all.
I have been a million places and seen a million faces
There was a lot I was going through
Please do understand that I do have something planned
to make it up to you
We could go outside and watch the setting sun
Or maybe just stay here and have a little fun
We can do anything that you want to do
I’ll do anything to show my love for you
Just give me one more chance
I’ll show you how to make great romance
This big heart of mine
is telling me it’s fine
This big heart of mine
is telling me I’m fine
This big heart of mine
is telling me you’re fine.
This big heart of mine
is telling me I’m fine
This big heart of mine
is telling me we’re fine.
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Author's Comments

Eh. I like this one personally but it came out different than what I thought it would. I was listening to "Idiot Kings" by Soul Coughing and I become inspired by it. I thinking about what I would write and came up with something so magnificent. Then I put it on paper and got this. I guess because when I put it on paper, I started comparing it to my earier poems. Its obvious that the earlier ones were better. But I might be wrong. I will let all of you be the final judges.

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~SheepFace Sep 10, 2008, 2:02:36 PM
Sure reminds me of something one of my friends is going through. </3
:hug: Mr. Serious has lived up to his name and wrote a somewhat serious poem.

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Formerly ~arcangel-of-ice
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~spoonicuss Sep 12, 2008, 7:36:03 AM
song material :headbang: or maybe not but hey good none the less

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Take my love, take my land,
Take me where I cannot stand.
I don't care, I'm still free,
You can't take the sky from me.
:icondemonfox666:
~demonfox666 Oct 13, 2008, 2:50:24 PM
Thank you.

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A really cool game [link]
It rubbes the lotion on it's skin or else it gets the hose again.
I'm half demon and half human. Is that a problem?
I'm Ma
:icondemonfox666:
~demonfox666 Oct 13, 2008, 2:50:57 PM
:hug: I guess I did. :D

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A really cool game [link]
It rubbes the lotion on it's skin or else it gets the hose again.
I'm half demon and half human. Is that a problem?
I'm Ma
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